Revisions finished! O frabjous day, callooh callay! It’s fascinating how a few words, or a line, or a paragraph, can completely change the tone and meaning of a scene. So not huge amounts of rewriting. Just a little snicker-snack here and there with my vorpal blade of mimsiness. Or something.
I really like the changes. Now I need to let them rest for a few days, then re-read.
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The Second Duchess
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I lift a glass of virtual champagne in celebration!
Funny, I feel the same way after adding that one little scene to my MS and simplifying a plot point (which took changing all of three sentences). Everything just seems to hang together now, nice and snuggly.